The subject of my literacy narrative is a story I wrote in
the third grade called Twilight Twins. I’m
pumped about how I managed to transition between parts of the narrative. I’m
quite fond of how I shifted into a summary of our brief story. I used my trip
to the library to show off the story to the librarian as a transition into
describing the faults and strong points of Twilight
Twins. Also I am very proud of some of the descriptive parts within the
essay. I worked especially at recollecting the settings of the moments I
mentioned in my narrative.
I believe I might have to go back through and
correct some of my sentence structures and switch out some words for more
accurately descriptive choices. I’m not particularly confident about how I
concluded the narrative. I typed it on the remaining five minutes of a plane
ride that I was allowed to use electronics and ended up slightly rushing the
ending. I also might need to go back through and add some more sensory to some
parts of it. Other than those few instances, I think I typed up a reputable
rough draft.
Reading Log
Prodigy by Marie Lu
9/5/13
120 minutes 14%-30%
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