My
visit to the writing center was very comfortable and I communicated nicely with
my helper, while working on my literary analysis rough draft. She helped me figure
out how I can go through my paper to find mistakes. By reading it out loud instead
of in my head, my mind won’t skip over the details. I found and fixed a lot of
typos by doing this, as well as improved sentence fluency. By doing this I also
found things that were extraneous or out of order that would have made my paper
really confusing to read.
My
writing fellow also helped me decide whether or not to include several
analogies I had written into my essay. I believe I ended up taking most of them
out because they were slightly distracting. Most of them only made sense in my
head and when I typed them up they seemed really far stretched. She helped discuss
the few insecurities I had about things in my paper and either reassured me or
helped me improve them. I wasn’t too sure about having my paper follow the
plot, but I knew that in order for me to explain my thesis I would have to.
When I asked her, she agreed with me and gave me reasons why it would be okay.
I walked out of my visit at the writing center, more confident in what I had
written so far and sure about what I still needed to work on.
Reading/Working Log
Rereading and annotating LOTF- 1 hour
Reading focus journal- 45 mins
Reading Focus Project- 35 mins
WHAP Textbook- 25 mins
I felt like I had a similar experience, and my paper turned out pretty well. How did you do on the first draft (if I may ask)? Also, who helped you (again if I may ask)?
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